Name: Hazakura Enishi

Age: 19
Gender: Male.
Village & country: Konohagakure no sato , land of fire
Rank: Previously a recently promoted Jounin, S-class missing nin as of right now.
Current team: n/a (previously Team 9, along with Kanzuki Shinn and Hyuuga Hana)
Clan/Organization: Organizaion X (not real name, soon to be named)

Battle Style: Ninjutsu > Taijutsu >>> Genjutsu
Items/Weapons:
: 25 regular conductivity enhanced senbon
: 50 Isolated conductivity enhanced senbon
: 10 conductivity enhancing seals
: 5 light bombs
: 5 exploding tags
: 1 Scroll for summoning Quebrada

Chakra Affinity: Lightning (first), Earth (second)

Known Jutsu:

All the basic jutsus (Kawarimi, Henge, Bunshin etc.) plus:

Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.

Kai – Release
Rank: Unknown
Type: Ninjutsu
Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the effect of the spell.

Shuunshin no jutsu - Body flicker technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Shuunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance. Shuunshin no jutsu usually requires a charge-up time so it’s not commonly used in battle.

Shikumi no jutsu – Death viewing technique (killing intent)
Rank: N/A
Type: Genjutsu
Shikumi no Jutsu is a technique used to completely stun an opponent. If the target looks into the eyes of the ninja, their mind is suddenly inflicted with intense visions of their own brutal killing. This results in their body going into shock and being unable to move. If the target can physically injure their own body, the pain can be enough to end the paralysis (this is the jutsu Orochimaru used on Sakura and Sasuke in the forest).

Raiton • Denkou Tenkin no jutsu – Thunder element • Lightning Transmission Technique
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
This is not really a jutsu but rather the ability of transmitting electrical current to the specially designed senbon Enishi always carries with him. With the specially designed senbon, any lightning will be stored and transmitted among similar sources in the vicinity. This is Enishi’s main way of fighting. By throwing the specially designed senbon (a gift from the Kanzuki clan after he graduated) he can designate any area of application of the current, changing the battlefield to his likening. So, Enishi could, for instance, make a “road” for lightning and not activate it until his opponent, unknowingly, were at the other end, then, he’d just need to activate the current (via either, releasing previously stored energy on the senbon themselves, or activating any thunder elemental jutsu in the vicinity) for his opponent to be electrocuted, given his opponent has already been marked by another senbon or one of the special seals Enishi carries around or, Enishi could trap his opponent inside an electrified perimeter, turning all his senbon attacks into a chance of paralyzing his opponent. This technique allows for complex strategies, as well as a surprise element for anyone unaware of his techniques. There are two kinds of specially designed senbon, the first is regular, thus transmitting whatever electricity it absorbs to the nearest ground (this are the ones you want the opponent to have in his body), and the other is the isolated, wich allows the electricity to be kept efficient even though it might be stuck to the ground (this are the ones used to make a jail, for instance, or a road for lightning).

Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows him to summon different size and skill levels of creature. Enishi uses it to summon Quebrada, king of speed, a summoning he received from Shinn.

Raiton • Denryuu Reiki no jutsu – Thunder element • Electrical Current Aura Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
This is mainly a defensive technique that allows Enishi to be charged by electricity in his immediate vicinity. He charges himself with an electrical aura capable of shocking anyone who touches it, its not enough to paralyze an adult though, but it can still surprise the opponent as well as make most people stumble a bit. The jutsu is invisible to the naked eye, and although it’s not capable of high levels of damage, it gives high levels of protection against lightning based attacks. It could also be used to add more punch as well as a surprise to his taijutsu. On a normal battle, Enishi would probably “turn it on”. If on a highly conductive surface, though, the technique becomes considerably more tiresome and powerful. So, if fighting an opponent, both fall in the same pool of water, all the electricity would be released on the environment, and, unless turned off, it would keep draining the user’s chakra in order to “feed the field” in this scenario, the opponent could receive considerable amounts of damage, depending on the size and amount of water, for instance if just on a pond, up to the knees, he’d probably receive a lot more of damage, if in the middle of the ocean, on the other hand, the user would be hurt more than the victim as he would be asked more chakra than he can give and be forced to turn it off.

Ninpou: Raiton kuchiyose • Denkou Meshi no jutsu – Thunder element Summoning • Lightning Call Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
This technique allows the user to summon Quebrada, king of speed in the form of a lightning falling from the sky. The lightning has the characteristics of any other lightning falling on the most conductive surface (the enemy, given he has any senbon or seal attached, or has been electrocuted recently, seeing as he would receive an electrical charge from this), and Quebrada will reform from it. After summoned, Quebrada is able to transform into the lightning at will as well as the summoner is able to summon him again in the form of lightning, by using the same jutsu.

Raiton • Denkou no Kusari no jutsu – Thunder element • Chain of Lightning Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary handseals, the user can form a small ball of lightning between his hands. This allows him to cast a lightning bolt on the ground directly ahead of him by releasing it from both his hands. This lightning bolt will travel as a chain lightning from the closest conductive object to the next, until it makes ground. The lightning bolt is fairly powerful and easily capable of driving a person unconscious. It loses strength the farthest it travels though.

Raiton • Jiryoku Denkou no jutsu – Thunder element • Magnetic Lightning Technique
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Jiryoku Denkou no jutsu is a highly advanced jutsu developed by Enishi a few weeks before becoming a Jounin as well as his ace in the hole. After forming the necessary handseals, this technique allows the user to create a thick, shiny “rope” of unbelievable high amounts of concentrated lightning connecting his hands. This “rope” has the apparent consistency of rubber or gum, and is thick enough to cover the user’s hands at the extremes, its thinner point being at the center of itself. This energy is malleable and can be given any shape while in the hands of the user, however, once detached, it’ll only be capable of “shortening” at will (by increasing the polarity of one of the extremes I might be holding) as it will only be capable of “stretching” by external forces (such as me moving away from wherever it is sticked too) and only if I diminish the polarity of my extreme, thus allowing it to stretch. In other words, I have the ability to stretch it as I would stretch any other gum, while having the ability to shorten it at will. The amount of energy transmitted to the jutsu can only be given during the “forming” phase, after that, the user should reattach it to both his hands again in order to “refill” This jutsu has several abilities depending on the amount of energy spent and the will of the user. As its electrical energy, it has a permanent current going from negative to positive and vice versa. The user can stick himself to whatever surface he wants given that said surface has any kind of ground (as something suspended in the air would have no place for the electricity to flow, still, depending on the amount of energy, even air could potentially be capable of transmitting electrical current, at level 3 this jutsu is capable of that), the user will be able to keep himself attached to said surface at all costs (being as it is a “sticking” in the molecular level) and only as long as the user decides to keep the energy from being released (so, lets say I have one extreme on my right hand and the other on my enemy. He won’t be able to free himself under no circumstances unless I decide to de-attach myself by inverting the current thus losing a tidy bit of energy (a really small amount though, not the kind you actually take into account unless severely abused) OR if I decide to free all energy in which case, since he’s at the other end, he’d receive its full strength. No chance of survival for level 2 and 3 (level 2 at medium capacity, level 3 at no capacity). If released from both ends, the jutsu will behave like any rubber gum rope would behave when thrown, but if the extremes were to touch each other it would become a ring impossible to dissolve, even for the user, as it’d have no ends to attach himself to. Enishi has mastered this way of throwing it, using it to capture foes, for instance. Only the extremes are attachable (“sticky”), the middle being just current, if someone where to touch it s/he would receive a shock of electricity which intensity may vary, and would most probably be paralyzed for some time. The other possibilities would be that he’s standing into something with a far higher conductivity than whatever it is the receiving extreme is attached to, in which case all the current would be freed, killing the unfortunate guy 2 out of 3 times OR he was lucky enough to touch a really discharged level 1 jutsu so he just staggered and depleted the jutsu, with no ill consequences other than some cramp or something. Enishi has also been able to form it into a “rubber ball” to throw around, but it isn’t as effective in this form, although, he will use it from time to time in level one just to throw at somebody with hopes of paralyzing him/her. By attaching the level 3 or the fully charged level 2 to an opponent and releasing the energy you can be sure it’s a one-hit KO for any normal human (level 2 as it would probably throw him/her unconscious or dead depending on his/her own strength, level 3 as it would roast anything to ashes). On level 1 it would probably just paralyze the victim for some time. It’s also useful as support when moving in a forest or to stop a fall. The thinner the “rope”, the less energy it carries. At full strength it can be as thick as a human torso with the hands of the user at about 15 cm from each other. Enishi only has energy for casting 3 level threes and one 2 on a single battle, but he’ll be totally depleted after the last one.


Character Personality/Description:
Enishi is pale, with black, slightly curly, hair. He has a slim build, and is quite athletic. He wears it just a bit long (kinda like Shinn), just enough to partially cover his ears (lets say Itachi/Sasuke long). He has emerald green eyes, easily noticeable. As for his wardrobe, he usually wears a sleeveless shirt, slightly yellow in color (a very light yellow, almost a crude white if you like), kinda raggy, with a V cut for the neck part. Under this shirt he wears a mesh of which you can only see the beginning at the lowest part of the V neck. He has only one, long and baggy, sleeve that starts over his right shoulder. It’s secured with a belt that starts on his right shoulder goes across his chest and down to his belt, to go up and across his back to his right shoulder again. The sleeve, as well as the belt, is used to store his special senbon, on the part across the back, it’s used to store Quebrada’s summoning scroll. The sleeve is green in color. He wears green, very simple pants, with raggy looks as well (pastelized colors on all his clothes, as if overused). He wears his protector on top of his belt, which stores his regular equipment. He has been repeatedly been described as handsome.

Enishi could be thought of exactly the kind of guy you’d expect to be Shinn’s best friend. He’s mischievous, unable to take anything seriously and could be thought as irresponsible. He loves to speak highly of himself just for the hell of it, since most of the time he’s telling tales he expects nobody to believe. He’s always trying to make a move on every girl he finds, but never seriously, just as another way of getting a laugh at things. Unlike Shinn he’s not very good with women but he’s not that interested either.
Actually, Enishi is a person who has a deep respect for his elders as well as companions. Being mischievous and laughing at everybody is just his way to cope with stuff. Enishi would gladly give his life for those he cares about, and the people who know him is aware of the high level of commitment he’s capable of achieve for someone else. Shinn himself once said the only reason Enishi doesn’t mess with girls is because deep down he cares too much about people to risk doing any harm to anyone. He’s very supportive of his friends and has a close relationship with them. He’s just the kind of guy you’d love to have at a party, as well as the kind of guy everyone likes. He has few really close friends though, since his very own extroverted personality is a huge barrier for most people. He likes partying and most people see him as very immature.

Family/Friends:

• Hazakura Ryo (Father, missing, current status unknown)
• Hazakura Tae (Mother)
• Hazakura Remi (Older sister)
• Hazakura Makoto (Younger sister)
• Kanzuki Shinn (Close friend, former team member)
• Hyuuga Hana (Close friend, former team member)
• Asahina Tamao (Close friend, deceased)
• Asahina Kanryuu (Former Jounin in charge, deceased)

Although a noble family, well known throughout Konoha, with roots that could be traced to the first villagers; Enishi’s family has never been one with a shinobi tradition. Traditionally, the Hazakuras have always been a high class family mainly in the flower market, in charge of the decoration of temples and other buildings, and lately (primarily due to the influence of some high ranked shinobis supportive of Hazakura Ryo’s successful military campaign), a large influence in politics; Enishi grandfather himself being a tremendously notorious figure, direct advisor to the Kage himself. His father, Hazakura Ryo, was a very strong ninja who gave them quite some reputation in Konoha (even giving the family a chance to start a career in politics), for this reason, this latest generation of the Hazakura family seemed to be somewhat full of youngsters eager to continue the short-lived ninja fame of the Hazakuras, as well as quite some resentment coming from the rest of the political families in Konoha, who didn’t like the idea of a new player in the game with such a sudden entry. For this reason, they have gained a lot of political enemies and in the past few years have been obliged to defend their prestige more than once, with their honor at stake.

Character History:
Enishi was one of those youngsters with a strong admiration for Shinobis and for his father in particular. His father decided that, as the only boy, he should become a ninja like himself, so Enishi entered the academy. Although greatly talented, his slacking as well as his mischievous nature never helped him in getting through school, he would flunk tests just to get a laugh out of his teachers. He met many people and developed a very extroverted nature. Later, with the ever-growing political career of his family, he started feeling some resentment, but never quite enough to turn him down. His little sister, however, wasn’t as able to just shake it off, so she would easily cry when confronted and teased by her companions. This way, Enishi grew up very protective of his sister, although never in a totally honest manner. He started growing closer and closer to his family and close friends the more he noticed this growing resentment in the rest, even though it never directly affected him, but his little sister. This way, Enishi graduated from the academy at age 12 with a few really close friends (Shinn, Hana) and a lot of acquaintances. The fact that, even though he was a trouble-maker he passed the final exam without any problem, was also suspiciously seen by rival families, and the more he grew, the more he could notice the constant attacks to his family that were going on in the political world. Actually, Enishi had always been a very talented shinobi, and he passing the test when none of his companions-not-friends expected it was the biggest proof (his teachers, on the other hand, knew the potential was there). Eventually, he grew tired of the constant attacks on his family, and decided he’d show the world how good of a ninja he could be. By himself. This motivation, along with the slight rivalry he had with his long-time friend Shinn, convinced him to train beyond his limits, and prove himself to the rest. It could be assumed that, in his team, he was to be the strong-headed troublemaker, while Shinn was the talent and Hana the girl, but in reality the three of them could be thought as the talent in any other team, and there was really not much difference in maturity between him and his best friend Shinn. After graduating Enishi participated in the Chuunin exams and made it to the finals, along with his whole team, but none of them would pass. The next year though, the three of them would, proving their value. In the meanwhile, inside the political scene, the attacks to the untainted honor of his family would continue but none with much success, not only due to the successful campaign of his father but now also due to the impressive potential he was starting to show. During his time with team 9, Enishi would get to know Asahina Tamao, the daughter of their Jounin sensei Asahina Kanryuu and, along with Hana and Shinn, become really close (Enishi in particular, became particularly close), even to the point of sponsoring the growing relationship she started having with his best friend Shinn, also, during this time, Enishi would develop strong feelings for his childhood friend and companion Hyuuga Hana, but he wouldn’t act on them, sensing a growing attraction between Hana and Shinn. When Shinn started dating (exclusively) Tamao, he decided to give it a shot, but before he could make his move Tamao was apparently murdered by his own father before commiting suicide and the grief brought Shinn and Hana together. At the same time, the political scene would be boiling with unsuccessful attacks on the Hazakuras. These attacks would have proven useless if it weren’t for the fact that, just days after the Asahina incident, it was reported that, during a mission, Hazakura Ryo had betrayed Konoha, and tried to kill his whole team, the informant being the only survivor, and then escaped. Enishi was devastated by these news and in the middle of his grieving for Tamao’s death he even considered dropping his career as a ninja; but ultimately decided against it since it would give the tormentors of his little sister the final victory in the end. This event proved disastrous for the Hazakuras, who immediately lost public face, the honor of their family tainted. With the loss of the support from other political and military families, the political ground became a lot more unstable, and, although they still had the support of the Kage, as well as their financial and public face, the political one was given a low blow. This would be the beginning of the end of their promising (and well intended) political career. During the next year Shinn would be promoted to Jounin at the early age of 14 years old and Enishi would become part of ANBU along with Hana. From here on his strong feelings for her would come back and never leave again. He wouldn’t act on them again for respect of her strong feelings for Shinn. During his time in ANBU hes able to discover something that would shake his ground: the Asahina incident wasn’t as clear as he had previously believed. Asahina Kanryuu along with his family COULD have been murdered, contrary to what himself and his friends ever thought. There just wasn’t enough evidence to prove it. He really commited himself to the truth after this. After breaking up with Hana, Shinn started dating Makoto, Enishi’s younger sister, he, of course, approved and even encouraged after Shinn, never willing to lose someone he cared for like that, gave her the scroll to summon Quebrada, the summon he’d used up to this point for fighting, to act as her bodyguard. Enishi understood this as a sign of serious commitment since it was really Shinn’s main weapon before becoming a Jounin. At the age of 15 Enishi became an ANBU squad leader and with this more freedom to do his bidding as well as his own private investigation concerning what had really happened to his father, as well as what really happened to Tamao. Eventually he came across something else: the supposed survivor of his father’s betrayal was really a murderer responsible for many assassinations inside Konoha itself, and even uncovered evidence that suggested he might have taken illegal jobs and missions without the knowledge of the Kage and the higher authorities. After giving him to the authorities, he started doubting his version of the facts, and started to wonder what had really happened. All these doubts in his head led him to train even more harshly, and he was promoted to Jounin a few weeks before turning 16 along with Hana. By this point Enishi no longer believed his father to be a traitor and all his doubts haunted him. He hoped that the supposed survivor would eventually talk, but this would never be as he, one night, managed to escape. The enraged Enishi went after him in spite of his superiors giving orders of the contrary, but to no avail. After returning, and on a political move to further damage the reputation of his family, he was severely punished as well as expelled from the ANBU. This enraged Enishi to the point of accusing some of these families of corruption, political assassination and protection of a fugitive. Thanks to the intervention of the Kage did this event not build up to something bigger. The honor of his family received a strong blow and Enishi decided he would clean his father and family’s honor no matter what, disgusted at the amount of corruption in political Konoha. He knew they still had the approval of the Kage, so he informed the Kage of his findings, as well as his plans on leaving the village in order to clean his family’s honor, no matter the consequences. He left a letter for Shinn and Hana and one night, left. When on his way for the door, his sister came to him with a present, the present being the scroll for summoning Quebrada, she also had told Shinn and he, she said, approved. With this, Enishi left the village.


Miscellaneous Character Information:
Academy grad age: 12
Chuunin promotion: 13
Jounin promotion: 16

He’s quite extroverted and a “funny guy”
Although not as tai-centered as Shinn, his taijutsu level should not be taken lightly, as he’s also trained is whole life with two very talented tai-masters such as Hana and Shinn
He likes painting.
He has a talent for dancing.
Has terrific speed (Although less than Shinn), and very good chakra capacity.

He received a special summoning from his sister, who in turn got it from Shinn as his father was the one who attained during the war with suna. This summoning is known as “Quebrada, king of speed”.

His taijutsu style is also very speed centered, as he learned to fight while training with Shinn, its more balanced than Kanzukiryu though, as its had more influence than the former from the Hyuuga style of fighting. From Hana’s in particular (which in turn differs from the rest of the Souke members)

His jutsus and style of fighting is greatly influenced by his friendship with Shinn as he gave him his specially designed Senbon able to retain lighting. Kanzukiryu has had an influence in his own style of fighting as well.

*Special notes on his taijutsu: Enishi has a remarkably good taijutsu, and is well versed in the use of a sword, but more importantly, the use of “string” weapons (such as chains). By summoning Quebrada and letting him transform into the chain of lightning, his level of threat as a taijutsu user improves considerably. More on this on Quebrada’s thread.



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My english is AwE5oMe!!!!1111oneoneoneoneeleventhousandonehundredeleven (4.5, really)

SUMMONING REGISTRATION: QUEBRADA THE SPEED KING

Quebrada, King of speed, is a special summon that can only be summoned, as of right now, by Hazakura Enishi, as he's in control of the only scroll. Quebrada holds a strict code of honor though, so, even when summoned by somebody else, is always loyal to its rightful master. Enishi in this case (or any member of the Hazakura family)

Quebrada is an A-rank summon with skills that easily match those of a Tokubetsu Jounin. In appearance he looks like a cross between an Iguana and a horned chameleon, but with a serpent tail, and no legs (just arms, near the head). It has a big (chameleon-like) head, with barbs such as those seen in Iguanas and two horns protruding from its "forehead" (between its chameleon eyes), just like the horns on horned chameleons. He's ALWAYS moving, kinda like a hyperkinetic kid. His head is around the size of the head of a big bull, and he's about 5 meters long from his ehad to the tip of its tail, getting thinner the closer to the end; the tip of its tail being as thin as a thread.

Quebrada is known (as he introduces like that himself) as "king of speed" seeing as its really tremendously fast. When trying to go slow his speed would easily outmatch that of most nins. When trying to go fast he's not only invisible to the human eye (on normal speed he's invisible to the human eye) but also capable of transforming into lightning (as it would need to transform into light if it were to speed up any more).

Quebrada is not too strong though, and although awfully fast, just a couple of hits would knock him out (no one can touch it though so...)

His claws are as strong as regular metal and allow for quick attacks on the enemy, as well as help deflecting enemy kunai.

Skills:

Brutally fast. Ridiculously fast. Fast fast fast. Its all there is.

Can turn into lightning at will OR by command of its summoner.

Can generate a small field of electricity to defend itself.

Can transform into a twin bladed sword (not used by Enishi) OR into the Chain of lightning (Enishi's choice for a weapon)

dude....how long did it take you to right that, it took me forever just to read it o_O, well in any case, seems like a really cool character =) I particularly like the lightning transmission technique =)

Hahaha

It didnt really take all that long, i had an idea of it since i created Shinn (that guy took a lot more) but yeah, i find it cool too.


Hopefully theres no problem with him.

WHY!?! I HATE READING lol

cant you summarize some techniques plzzzz im not reading all that!

Hahahahaha!!

Dude!! if you dislike reading what did you do to end up RP-ing in a forum!!

Yeeea...i know its lots and lots...sorry sorry... but i reaaally tried to summarize...

still if you want a super summary here it is:

He's basically a lightning element user, who'll paralyze you and roast you with some cool lightning technique, OR summon Quebrada and double team your ass OR summon Quebrada, let him transform into the Chain of Lightning and tai-kick your ass. While electrocuting you. And paralyzing you.

magnetic lighting is like 600 words long (prob more) i mean....u suck at summarizing lol it could be soooo much shorter. I mean NO jutsu has that long a description.

Its a really complicated technique...thats why its so long....im really really really sorry but please o please read it!!!



Pretty please??




Pretty please with sugar on top??

alright now fo the probs...

Ur character has either crappy jutsu that every1 nos or too powerful jutsu, i mean wher are the okay jutsu??? I suggest you add some C rank jutsu thats unique to ur character.
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Kawarimi no Jutsu - Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu The ninja locates a hiding spot, and quickly replaces him/herself with an item to hide in that spot. The opponent will become confused and the user will be able to attack the enemy when his guard is down. Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu The user takes the Illusionary form of anything, as long as it neither is to huge or to small. The user must have seen the object or person to henge into it, and trained it for some time. Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu The Ninja creates an illusionary copy of him/herself. The copy is merely an illusion and can't create any sound or attacks. Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat. Kai – Release Rank: Unknown Type: Ninjutsu Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the effect of the spell. Shuunshin no jutsu - Body flicker technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Shuunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance. Shuunshin no jutsu usually requires a charge-up time so it’s not commonly used in battle

these are considers the basic jutsu that EVERY ninja (at least chuunin) should no (excluding Temporary Body Paralysis Technique i guess) so we assume you no how to do these thing so you shouldnt add them.
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umm wth is Quebrada??? i mean wats he look like??? and how come it isnt a "summoning technique" when you SUMMON him???
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o yah (not an actual problem tho lol) and PLZ cut it in to paragraphs next time so i can read it better w/o gettin lost
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other then that everything seems fine = i gave up reading

Thank you so much for giving it a try!! Still Shinn was longer than this and i think you red it.


Well yeah...i guess ure rite about the basic jutsus, but i dont think all of them are that obvious, it should be expected for an ANBU to know Kanashibari, but i dont take that one as a granted. Sorry for adding the academy level ones.

As for the OK jutsus i think i have them, as a matter of fact i couldnt help noticing i have one of each for my original jutsus, not counting D-ranks. Theres the electrical aura jutsu and the lightning transmission both of which are not really that powerful.

The summoning technique is a Raiton kuchiyose, meaning a combination of a raiton technique and a summoning technique. The same kind of technique Kakashi uses when he summons his nin-dogs to appear underground and catch his opponent (as he did to Zabusa), i guess i could add the regular kuchiyose as well, but i really tried not to add any extra jutsus (as i did with Shinn, where every single variation from his techniques is explained). Still ill add it if you think i should.

Edit: Oh! i forgot. And about Quebrada i intend to create a special thread for him. I really didnt want to add too much stuff to the first post. I failed at that.

Edit2: There, i took out the basic jutsus and added regular Kuchiyose.

Approved (May 28, 2007)

PS: when you make ur summoning registration if ur thing (sry i have no idea what quebrada is still) has a bio or description that is longer then 2 paragraphs ill be.................mad SO DONT DO IT! KEEP IT SHORT AND SIMPLE!